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Author: Derek Neighbors
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Subject: press release proposal
der.hans wrote:
|>AP style for time of day is: "from 10 a.m. to 4 p.m.".
|
|
| AP style sucks. I'll change it if we think it should be changed, but I

think
| the way I have it is better. Guess I agree with the .eu on some things :).


As much as I agree with you on the sucks thing. We are dealing with
l'americans and the sad truth is they don't get it, unless you add AM/PM :)

|>>"The GNU/Linux system is a stable, secure operating system that isn't
|>>susceptable to email, web or document viruses.", said der.hans, CEO
of AZOTO
|>>(Arizona Open Technologies Organization). "AZOTO is proud to help user
|>>groups promote the use of Free Software.", he continued.
|>
|>I'd suggest using a real name. (I don't mean to offend if that is your
|>real name.)
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|
| For public use that is my real name.


Hans I agree with him here. It is non professional and it is not a
legal name or entity. I would change it to your real name or let
someone else make the quote. You want quotes to be verifiable and sound
extremely legit. Using pseudonymns doesn't help either (especially
when they don't even look like normal names)

Don't take that as a name criticism. I like der.hans as a name. I
think you should make it legal and go by DH or something. :)

|
|>Also, use name of organization first with acronym in parenthesis.
|
|
| I know that's standard, but we're trying to promote AZOTO as a brand.

I can
| change it if we need to, but I really prefer the explanation in parens.
| Heck, I generally prefer that anyway as the spelled out names often overly
| lengthen sentences.


I agree it should be Arizona Open Technology Association (AZOTO). I
understand your point, but we need to play the by the gramar rules.

| Do they even explain NFL, ABC, AOL anymore?

No but millions of people recognize those brands. 10 recognize AZOTO. :)



|> Demonstrations will include: Knoppix, a GNU/Linux distribution that runs
|> right from CD without using the hard drive, the Linux Terminal
|> Server Project (LTSP) which can provide 20 fast workstations for under
|> $2000, OpenOffice.org's office suite, and the GIMP drawing program.

|
|
| I want to highlight Knoppix this time around, so would prefer to give

it its
| own paragraph.

|
| Maybe we should be highlighting OpenOffice.org or something else instead.

|
| I think we highlighted LTSP last time.

Open Office is definitely worth highlighting.


- -Derek Neighbors