A couple of minor corrections, indicated in brackets:
2nd paragraph
Because it [is] freely downloadable from the Internet or available as an inexpensive distribution at most local computer stores, Linux is an...
Last paragraph
More information[deleted the "a"] about PLUG can be found on the website at
http://plug.phoenix.az.us/.
Reads great!
Alan
On Thu, 23 May 2002 07:32:59 -0700 Jim <
farli@unitywave.com> wrote:
I made a few changes and have attached the revised copy. Again, feel free to
improve on it.
On Thursday 23 May 2002 06:31, you wrote:
> I've written a short press release about the InstallFest that Bill might
> want to fax to KTAR's Computer Corner show which is every Saturday morning
> from 10:00-11:45. It would be great to get a mention on the show and even
> better if they did a remote or at least a call in to see how things are
> going. The show is sponsored by Data Doctors http://www.datadoctors.com/ .
>
> Feel free to make any improvements to my humble efforts. Do a Google search
> on "How to write a press release" for tips.
>
> Dennis Kibbe
>
> Ps - be sure to double space the printed copy
> =======================================
>> See http://PLUG.phoenix.az.us/navigator-mail.shtml if your mail doesn't
> post to the list quickly and you use Netscape to write mail.
>
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Jim
Freedom is worth protecting
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