press release proposal

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Am 11. Sep, 2003 schw=E4tzte Jeremy C. Reed so:

> Be sure to spell check that.


I fixed a couple of things. At least one would've been missed by a spell
checker :).

> And "it's" means "it is", so use "its".


Ooops. Missed that one.

> Also, to be newsworthy, opinions should be attributed. Who said
> "impressive adoption"? Who said "critical part"?
>
> And needs a source for last sentence. (Who or what says Microsoft is
> considering this?)


Let's get those straightened out if we want to keep that paragraph.

The site can link to further info, but we have limited resources in the
press release.

ciao,

der.hans
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