One small nit - 

"...and I will hold the volunteer helpers blameless for any damage to my
computer system..."

Perhaps you should PLUG to the hold blameless clause:

"...and I will hold the volunteer helpers and the Phoenix Linux User's
Group blameless for any damage to my computer system..."


Mark Phillips
Phillips Marketing, Inc.
480 945-0798 office
480 945-9197 fax
mark@phillipsmarketing.biz


-----Original Message-----
From: plug-discuss-admin@lists.plug.phoenix.az.us
[mailto:plug-discuss-admin@lists.plug.phoenix.az.us] On Behalf Of Ted
Gould
Sent: Monday, September 29, 2003 9:00 AM
To: plug-discuss@lists.plug.phoenix.az.us
Subject: Re: InstallFest menu - I need feedback

On Sun, 2003-09-28 at 07:21, Bart Garst wrote:
> I'm afraid this got lost in Friday's discussions so here it is
again...
> 
> I've got a combination waiver/install menu up for review:
> http://members.cox.net/bartgarst/waiver.html
> or as an OOo document:
> http://members.cox.net/bartgarst/waiver.sxw

Here I go:

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The purpose of this event is to distribute software packages that are
Open Source, legally distributable with no charge to the user.

I think that this should be "which is legally distributable"
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installation, but I recognize that because the software installed at
this event is licensed free of charge, the copyright

I don't think the reason that we don't want any liability is because the
software is free.  Microsoft doesn't have any liability if you read
their EULAs, and they charge a bunch!
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I don't think we need to have the installer sign this do we?
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I think the stuff on the bottom should be grouped into categories like
'basic' and 'advanced'.  I would expect someone who's a newbie to get
confused with a selection like 'Telnet'.  If it was under 'advanced'
they'd realize they weren't expected to understand.


Overall, cool, thanks for doing this.

	--Ted