On Thu, 11 Sep 2003, der.hans wrote:

> > Linux continues to receive impressive adoption among governments and
> > Fortune 500 companies alike.  It has become a critical part of any IT
> > professional's toolbox.  Many adoptors site usability, applications, and
> > total cost of ownership as reasons for adopting Linux.  After loosing
> > several contracts Microsoft is now considering Linux one of it's top
> > compeditors in the desktop market.
>
> Added that paragraph.

Be sure to spell check that.

And "it's" means "it is", so use "its".

Also, to be newsworthy, opinions should be attributed. Who said
"impressive adoption"? Who said "critical part"?

And needs a source for last sentence. (Who or what says Microsoft is
considering this?)

   Jeremy C. Reed
   http://www.reedmedia.net/